Losing Your Mind
Matthew Henrickson Poetry August 11th, 2009Losing Your Mind
It’s hard to say one thing
When everything comes out together
My thoughts are paragraphs
Instead of one line at a time.
Confused at what to think
When you’re always not sure
Careful where to go
When I’m never sure where you are.
I’ve lost your mind
It’s always somewhere else
I can only hope and pray
That I haven’t lost your heart as well
by Matthew Henrickson
Losing Your Mind,
September 12th, 2009 at 9:16 am
on the very last sentence where it says (That I haven’t lost your heart too.) it sounds better when you say it ” that i havent lost your heart as well” … or does it
__ I’ve lost your mind
It’s always somewhere else
I can only hope and pray
That I haven’t lost your heart as well.
🙂
November 9th, 2011 at 1:49 am
Yes it does. I changed it 🙂 Thank you