ATL Movie Poem Loves Deceit by Big Rube
Famous Poetry December 22nd, 2008Update: Many people seem to know the general idea, but still don’t fully get it. I wrote my own Interpretation of Loves Deceit. I tried to break it down the best I could and understood.
If you’ve seen ATL you know it has a dramatic ending. “Uncle George” recites a nice poem called Loves Deceit by Big Rube. Big Rube is a rapper from Atlanta and has done more poetry on ATL and other places.
“Love’s Deceit”
Pleasure turns to the pain of lessons learned from the strain of the questions burned in my brain about whether love is humane in its touch
These thoughts are like salmon swimming upstream in the tears of your deceit
Fighting a current hurt that kills more than is created by the chaos of our intertwined emotions
Chaotic because the anchor of Eros’ arrow has been plucked from the vessel of my undying infatuation
Separation not as simple as the distance between us
My mind no longer possessed by the demons that had been the overseers of my enslavement to your lies
The seeds of these lies rooted so deeply they’ve cracked the foundation of what we once shared
Allowing the faith in us I had sealed inside to gush out like a river
Ripping the image of our future together from my thoughts as violently and as brutally as if it were a child being taken from its mothers arms
I’m left surrounded in darkness but I refuse to be swallowed by it
My loneliness like night air; invisible to the eye obvious to the touch, in its cold uncomfortable ness
Yet If I could do all over again I’d do it in the same skin I’m in
To lay down and let love die, just stay down and let love lie
No, no, no, no, not I
I’ll stay around and let love fly
Even though I’ve seen its darkest form; deceit
Nothing else could tastes this warm or feel this sweet
by Big Rube
Listen to the poem on Youtube.
ATL Movie Poem Loves Deceit by Big Rube,
January 7th, 2009 at 8:27 am
I love poem it hits deep
January 18th, 2009 at 4:22 am
i think the word used in the movie is “obvious” not “oblivious”…but really nice poem…it just hits you hard…
February 17th, 2009 at 7:32 pm
This is one of my favorite poems as it illustrates the defining truth of love. Indeed it is deep as well as inspiring. Job well done. From one poetic soul to another
February 17th, 2009 at 9:35 pm
yes this is a great poem, thanks for commenting. it compliments the movies well
March 1st, 2009 at 12:15 am
if i had to do it all again
i’d do it in the same skin i’m in
to lay down and let love die
to stay down and let love lie
nah nah not i
i’ll stay around and let love fly
POWERFUL!!!!!!!!!!
May 13th, 2009 at 7:16 pm
can someone explain this poem to me in depth please?
and yes i know it has to do with love
June 29th, 2009 at 11:31 am
These are the correct lyrics for my poem.
Love’s Deceit
Pleasure turns to the pain of lessons learned from the strain of the questions burned in my brain about whether love is humane in its touch
These thoughts are like salmon swimming upstream in the tears of your deceit
Fighting a current hurt that kills more than is created by the chaos of our intertwined emotions
Chaotic because the anchor of Eros’ arrow has been plucked from the vessel of my undying infatuation
Separation not as simple as the distance between us
My mind no longer possessed by the demons that had been the overseers of my enslavement to your lies
The seeds of these lies rooted so deeply they’ve cracked the foundation of what we once shared
Allowing the faith in us I had sealed inside to gush out like a river
Ripping the image of our future together from my thoughts as violently and as brutally as if it were a child being taken from its mothers arms
I’m left surrounded in darkness but I refuse to be swallowed by it
My loneliness like night air; invisible to the eye obvious to the touch, in its cold uncomfortable ness
Yet If I could do all over again I’d do it in the same skin I’m in
To lay down and let love die, just stay down and let love lie
No, no, no, no, not I
I’ll stay around and let love fly
Even though I’ve seen its darkest form; deceit
Nothing else could tastes this warm or feel this sweet
June 29th, 2009 at 11:37 am
Wow, thanks for commenting. I adjusted the poem the way you commented.
Thanks again
November 28th, 2009 at 8:06 am
BEAUTIFUL !!!!!!
November 28th, 2009 at 8:21 am
BEAUTIFUL ! im in love with it .
No, no, no, no, not I
I’ll stay around and let love fly :]
December 30th, 2009 at 4:19 pm
man i love your poems i would like more. one love
January 14th, 2010 at 6:31 am
I absolutely love this poem. When i first heard it on the movie ATL i didn’t notice it b/c i was so tuned in to the movie.. But when i seen it again i really listen to the words. I researched it and printed it out. It is still hanging on my wall til dis day.. It inspires me. This is a really good poem..
Frankie J..
January 21st, 2010 at 5:08 pm
..OMG…this is my most favorite poem of all time..OF ALL TIME!!….Like..reading this poem (along with the situation I’m in at the moment) just made me tear up…like, I almost cried just now..and I’m not even the crying type…..This poem is SO..DEEP & SO..TRUE…Never have a person wrapped up so much emotion in literature…it is 19 lines utter perfection…I LOVE THIS POEM…it really makes me think..especially at a time like this…..
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January 22nd, 2010 at 5:57 am
this is a classic that will stand in time….
…even though iv seen its darkest form, deceit…
i love this!!!
February 1st, 2010 at 9:45 am
i really love this poem i read this every nightt and day
March 3rd, 2010 at 10:14 am
this poem only make you feel like even though you can deeply fall in love youwill always have to watch your back otherwise you may very well lay down and let love die.
March 9th, 2010 at 6:42 am
This poem is one of my favorites. The words seem to have been chosen so carefully. Everything makes sense in the deepest way possible.
The meaning of it is something warm and powerful.
March 20th, 2010 at 9:03 pm
This peom is beyond deep its far gone so true that you feel the words it reality on paper and it my favorite
April 11th, 2010 at 3:56 pm
I think this poem is truely outstanding and heart touching and very inspirational
April 12th, 2010 at 4:39 pm
the poem is actually recited by big rube.
May 12th, 2010 at 4:10 am
If is there any chance can you please interpret the poem for me…anyone
July 3rd, 2010 at 5:19 am
amazing.deep.
August 21st, 2010 at 5:35 pm
i dont like poems i dont like anything like this i like to smoke and drin party you nah mean but this shit rit here touched me
August 25th, 2010 at 7:27 pm
HEY umm im using this for my project lol andi dont just like this poem just b/c of the fact that its my homework.. its also the fact that it hits my in the heart lol you know?? mann you the greastest and i mean that.. thankss mann (:
September 3rd, 2010 at 4:57 pm
I understand the poem talks about love and also being lied to but could someone please interpret the poem more in depth and in lamen terms
September 5th, 2010 at 2:36 pm
I wrote my own interpretation that you can find here:
http://wordsofapoet.com/2009/05/18/loves-deceit-poem-interpretation/
Feel free to email me anytime with any questions you may have. I will do my best to answer them.
September 25th, 2010 at 7:43 pm
I never really like poetry but once i heard this in ATL , the best movie in the world, i just had to find the author behind these deep words. You did phenonmemal job Big Rube ! I loveeeeeee it !
January 30th, 2011 at 8:44 am
Big Rube is very talented he out did himself once again….shout out to Ga..!
April 25th, 2011 at 3:59 pm
When was this poem published.
August 6th, 2011 at 11:52 am
Hehehe that’s my uncle teddy :3
October 21st, 2011 at 10:00 am
man this is the best poem in the world this dude here is very talanted and i hope im not sound homoish or anything but i like the peom.
*Yet If I could do all over again I’d do it in the same skin I’m in
To lay down and let love die, just stay down and let love lie
No, no, no, no, not I
I’ll stay around and let love fly*
best part of the peom
October 25th, 2011 at 11:52 am
This Poem is so good that the first time i ever heard it i started to cry because mi guyfriend said it and he has a very deep voice which gave it more umpf also this peom is so good that I put up on mi wall!!!!!!!!!
April 9th, 2012 at 3:22 pm
I love this poem. Its so beautiful, I read it every day I wrote it down and I’m not usually into poetry. this is touching 🙂
May 20th, 2012 at 1:34 pm
Middle aged white woman cleaning house turns on TV to whatever channel her niece left it on the night before…going about my cleaning while some movie I know nothing about is playing and then this poem comes on….stops me in my tracks…had to immediately go to the Mac to look it up – Shakespearean quality writing – amazing metaphors – I’m not a fan of rap music but I’d buy a book of poems like this in a heartbeat Big Rube! Just some food for though in your business pursuits. Extremely well done, beautiful!
July 15th, 2012 at 11:25 am
I LOOOOOVVVVEEEEEEE THIS POEM.. AND ON THE MOVIE ATL. I LOVE HOW HE SAYS IT….
August 6th, 2012 at 2:06 pm
I’ve felt that kind of love. So when I read this poem it gives me chills
August 13th, 2012 at 9:29 pm
It’s better to have loved than to never have loved at all
This poem just goes into depth of love and loss
September 14th, 2012 at 6:13 am
Took me long to watch the movie and while I was watching and I reached on the Poem part I kept rewinding again and again to enjoy the words…then had to Google them and wooow…Real nice
September 23rd, 2012 at 4:36 pm
I love the wisdom that you display in your poetry, we need more positive poems that would make people scratch their heads, its deep brother very deep i look forward to reading more.